Two suggestions for inflation fanfics
Posted By Inflate123 on November 25, 2011
Fanfics abound in the inflation story community. I’ve seen Final Fantasy BE stories and One Piece Mansion inflation stories and [insert trendy movie/cartoon/TV show/anime/videogame here] expansion stories. It’s great that you are inspired to take something you love in normal life and make it into a pervy inflation adventure. But…you are assuming the audience knows what you know, and that is rarely true. I know a lot of pop culture references, but I don’t know them all. The show you’ve dedicated hours to watching might well be something I have never seen. So as a reader, I’m left out.
The problem with this from a writing standpoint is actually worse, because fanfics spare the author the trouble of establishing who these charcters are or why they behave the way they do. You know from playing an 80-hour RPG or watching five seasons of a TV show exactly how and why the characters will do something. So by using this narrative shortcut, you are skipping a lot of the work that goes into making a compelling story. Why do I care about this character? Do I sympathize with them? Should I feel bad that our plucky heroine is getting inflated because luck never goes her way, or is she a total bitch and I should enjoy this revenge fantasy? A non-fanfic establishes those barriers in the telling. Too many fanfics skip that step altogether and just go “you know, it’s Squiggles — she’s like that.” No, actually, I don’t. So don’t fall into that trap.
And for the record, it would be nice to note that your story is a fanfic at the outset. When I did a riff on Cinderella, I said, “this is a riff on Cinderella.” In the file. At the top of the story. So you would know the context going in. Very often lately I’ve opened a story, started to read, and had no idea I was reading a derivative work until halfway through. It’s still your story, but you have to set it up, folks.
A few weeks ago I found a tiny thumbnail on a random website of a blonde in a cheetah-print leotard — same image shown here, only even smaller. The image had been hijacked and used for someone’s ad campaign, so I couldn’t figure out who she was or where it originally appeared. But I liked what I saw — nice curves, spandex, gorgeous hair…do I even have to explain?