New story: The Perfect Storm
Posted By Inflate123 on December 28, 2009
December seems to be my writing month. Maybe it’s just because my mind has some free time with the closure of the year and the mental break of the holidays, but I wrote The Corset and Happy Holly Days in Decembers past. And this year, I’ve tossed off a new story, The Perfect Storm.
I should warn you about what this story is not. It’s not an Airy Tale; I have an idea for the next one, but the muse wanted this story finished first. It’s not played for laughs; I wouldn’t call it serious, but it’s not my usual “inflation with flirtation” setup. What’s more, it’s not about a female blowing up; it’s my first male inflation story.
Most importantly, it’s not as innocent as the ones I’ve written before. I’ve avoided getting hardcore in the prose in the past, partly just because I would rather write about inflation than sexual acts. But this time I made an exception, even if my word choice is on the clean side. While I love vulgarity in my everyday life, I think the more direct sexual slang words are jarring and break the flow while reading. You see these big COCKs and FUCKs in there and suddenly you feel like you’re reading Hustler, and I don’t want to write Hustler. But in these prurient times, make no mistake: This is an explicit story for an adult audience. The characters “do it” and everything.
Hope you enjoy it. I’d be interested to hear any feedback, especially considering it’s a departure for me. Guess this is just where my mind is at at the moment.
Oh, and I know the wife’s name, but I’m not telling.
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